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This song's getting the views up slowly. Still can't wait for it to hit the front page one day haha. Lets kill it with the next one E.T ;)

Hey.. that's me! Dope track brosef.

So epic, it's like an infinite buildup. Loved it.

Generdyn responds:

Thanks bro, nice to hear from you, I'll keep you posted on my stuff :D

Nice song Rama, not one of my favourites, but still a high quality song. A little too bassy to chuck lyrics on, but I suppose that's why these are labelled as instrumentals.

Still waiting for that song with you rapping on it ;) Whether it's in Russian or not.

Keep bringing the Russian Hip-Hop flavour brother.

Crueltool responds:

Ok. If you want to hear my rapping track. I will upload one or two)) Thanks man

Liquid sounds! Sounds awesome! Wicked bass line and sick sound effects, all piled into one beastly song. The synth breakdown really helped keep that repetitive feel out of it. The vocal samples could have been a little louder in my opinion, especially the first one at the drop.

Next time you drop a bomb, let me know personally. Also, try bumping the melody up an octave in a break, or even mid verse for a bar or so. It can really help with different sounds and often make your bass have a really unique sound. Experiment with different hits too; such as a 3/4 tempo breakdown stutter-step instead of a 4/4 one.

I would also like to see you experiment with different tempo's. Try to branch into the faster tempo's. Maybe even try a Drumstep song, it's good experimentation for an artist.

At any rate, enough of my advice, this song is dope. Mixture between liquid bass and chill, I love it.

Good work brah.

TheBiocide responds:

Thanks for the feedback, man! I always keep listener's concerns in mind when I'm working on new tracks - and yours shall be no exception ;) Thanks for the 5 and the wonderfully lengthy review.

As far as different tempos go, I've actually spanned quite a few ;) I've made Drum and Bass at 174bpm, Drumstep at 170bpm, Electro House at 128bpm and Dubstep at 140bpm. Along with a Moombahton track, at double the usual tempo - 210bpm. I'd really like to make a 100bpm track sometime but they're fuckin' trickyyy. At least for me... xD

Thanks again for the review, dude. You really got me into that one... Hahaha Hope to hear more from you in the future, my friend. You'll definitely be hearing more from me... ;)

Dayum! This track's funky! Love the multi-tracking you've used, absolutely perfect for the song. The chorus was awesome, just, all round good listening.

This one is actually going in my favourites, you did so well Francis.

Might look at a collab in the future ay?

Francis-Po responds:

Thanks Alot, Glad I can go into your favorites! Means alot to me.. Been working hard and getting super creative.. After all, Its art. And a Collab in the future is def possible.. Hit me up with more details and what not!..

You did well on this song Francis. You've got a damn good quality mic. Great job mixing, and your flow was fair dope.

My only problem I have with this song is that there was no real focal point in the lyrics. What is the meaning behind your lyrics, what are you trying to say in this song? It seems to me that it was a bit all over the place. You had a little bit of this and a little bit of that.

Lyrics will always be the strong point in any song. You're a good rapper Francis, so I want to see you put more story into your lyrics, make them have one topic you're talking about. That's when you'll become a great rapper.

Will be looking out for more of your stuff. Props.

Francis-Po responds:

Yes I can agree with you, I do pride myself in writing a full story.. Im a philosophical artist I sometimes talk in tongue, Hence the lyrics in this song, "Its like the Morris code everytime I explode".. Everything I say does have meaning tho. Some are easy to see what im saying and some are incredible hard. The lyrics that is.. But thanks a bunch man, i appreciate it, I couldnt do it without my producer tho, Me and Him together are a good team. Anything in the future I will send you a pm... Love the constructive criticism tho, I only want to get better

Funky! You're delving into the OLD ol'skool Hip-Hop here friend! Back in the day, Funk was basically Hip-Hop, and it's good to see that you've brought back a taste of the good ol' style Hip-Hop.

The brass in this song was a huge improvement from your last song that featured it, so it's really good to see that you're constantly improving from the reviews you read. It just goes to show that you care what your audience think of your music. Makes us want to keep writing reviews because we know you'll listen.

Good track, nice flow. Can't wait to hear more!

Crueltool responds:

Thanks dude! i always read all comments here & others. And i need all your critic every time - it help me.

Those strings are the definition of ill. I like the way you've kept the vocal sample and choir just quiet enough that you can hear the emotion, but not so it's the focal point of the beat.

The pattern you've used the strings in, leave room for loads of soul in the lyrics, as if the strings are made to be missing something. And in my opinion that's a story. That's where the lyrics would come in. I feel as though you prepared for that in this song, so good work! It takes a talented artist to find the balance between the perfect instrumental and a solo song without lyrics.

Can't wait to hear who writes the story about the man who stood as the Last Monument.

Dope, all round. Good work Rama.

Crueltool responds:

This track is really causing some emotional feelings. Each of my track, is a reflection of my mood and perception of reality at some point in life (a day or two). Each track is written from the heart and feeling, and possibly experience. Therefore, I always like to see your response (any). Continue to more)

I really like your style on this one bro, I love how you've switched up the kick and stuff. Sounds real dope.

I felt that the string section could have just been the slightest bit louder, but I guess that's just me being addicted to strings in Hip-Hop.

Keep pumpin' out the good shit bro! Love it!

Crueltool responds:

Thanks for comment man!! This si just start of my new understanding of beatmanking.
as long you live - as long you learn))

A kid with insomnia, just trying to make it.

Jesse Chisholm @InvasiveInsomniac

Age 30, Male

Pro Beatboxer

Australia

Joined on 8/14/10

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