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InvasiveInsomniac

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Dope

This song has loads of emotion and soul in it. I can imagine some really heartfelt lyrics on this.

You've done so well man, I have listened to every one of your tracks over and over and over. You're basically all I listen to when I'm on Newgrounds.

And as for the people who drop zero bombs, ignore 'em. Haters are going to hate.

But you'll be sure to get a 5 from me.

Excellent work man, keep it up.

Crueltool responds:

Hi man! Thanks for support me here. You right! I will ignore 'em.

No Samples!

This is excellent, and the fact that you've taken these sounds that you've recorded live? Amazing. I love it. Props SH, you've done well.

Sounds much better

Big improvement from what it was. Much happier with this track. I like the way you've controlled your breaks and fills, and the added ambiance tones too. Props. I wouldn't exactly call it techno, it did fit better in New Wave. Good job, solid track.

Xenophaje responds:

Often times I can't decide genre. I think it would be much easier if they were a little more generic.

Thanks for the review!
:)

This..

This is real Hip-Hop.. Reminds me so much of Lupe Fiasco.
Rhymes are so solid. Beat is slick. Flow is dope. Perfect.
Incredible guys.

5/5
10/10
Faved.

nunie7 responds:

Your awesome. Thanks for the review.

Much, much better

I'm gettin' down to this man, I can't wait to play it when I get home on my sound system.

KyeMarchio responds:

Thanks, glad to hear it.

Could have so much energy

Place a heavy sidechain bass in there, and make that main lead more dirty and louder, and you could have a song with major energy.

Decent

Love the intro. Chorus vocals need some work. And really guys, change the lyrics.

"I be straight kickin' with your bitch
she suckin' my dick then I eat that clit"

Amateur.

GspTeam responds:

Cut a lil slack brah it was my cuzs first time recordin

Similar to a song I know.

Change your sounds.. The main lead should be more prominent and sound a bit more dirty, or even more bassy. Add some blips and bloops in the background. But make them coincide with the main lead, or better yet, a counter melody. Also, make your hi-hat's more... t t t-t-t t t instead of tsh tsh tsh-tsh-tsh tsh tsh. Overall, a bit rough, but not bad.

KyeMarchio responds:

Thanks for the review. It is just a short version but I will be adding in some beeps and bloops and now that you mention it I will make it more bassy and sharpen up the sound of the hi hat.

Should be in Jazz.

Kinda made me tap my feet..

It's helping my headache.

For real. Not bad, I could actually see this going somewhere in the Video Game section if some changes were made to it.

A kid with insomnia, just trying to make it.

Jesse Chisholm @InvasiveInsomniac

Age 30, Male

Pro Beatboxer

Australia

Joined on 8/14/10

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