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Hey.. that's me! Dope track brosef.

Liquid sounds! Sounds awesome! Wicked bass line and sick sound effects, all piled into one beastly song. The synth breakdown really helped keep that repetitive feel out of it. The vocal samples could have been a little louder in my opinion, especially the first one at the drop.

Next time you drop a bomb, let me know personally. Also, try bumping the melody up an octave in a break, or even mid verse for a bar or so. It can really help with different sounds and often make your bass have a really unique sound. Experiment with different hits too; such as a 3/4 tempo breakdown stutter-step instead of a 4/4 one.

I would also like to see you experiment with different tempo's. Try to branch into the faster tempo's. Maybe even try a Drumstep song, it's good experimentation for an artist.

At any rate, enough of my advice, this song is dope. Mixture between liquid bass and chill, I love it.

Good work brah.

TheBiocide responds:

Thanks for the feedback, man! I always keep listener's concerns in mind when I'm working on new tracks - and yours shall be no exception ;) Thanks for the 5 and the wonderfully lengthy review.

As far as different tempos go, I've actually spanned quite a few ;) I've made Drum and Bass at 174bpm, Drumstep at 170bpm, Electro House at 128bpm and Dubstep at 140bpm. Along with a Moombahton track, at double the usual tempo - 210bpm. I'd really like to make a 100bpm track sometime but they're fuckin' trickyyy. At least for me... xD

Thanks again for the review, dude. You really got me into that one... Hahaha Hope to hear more from you in the future, my friend. You'll definitely be hearing more from me... ;)

Dayum! This track's funky! Love the multi-tracking you've used, absolutely perfect for the song. The chorus was awesome, just, all round good listening.

This one is actually going in my favourites, you did so well Francis.

Might look at a collab in the future ay?

Francis-Po responds:

Thanks Alot, Glad I can go into your favorites! Means alot to me.. Been working hard and getting super creative.. After all, Its art. And a Collab in the future is def possible.. Hit me up with more details and what not!..

You did well on this song Francis. You've got a damn good quality mic. Great job mixing, and your flow was fair dope.

My only problem I have with this song is that there was no real focal point in the lyrics. What is the meaning behind your lyrics, what are you trying to say in this song? It seems to me that it was a bit all over the place. You had a little bit of this and a little bit of that.

Lyrics will always be the strong point in any song. You're a good rapper Francis, so I want to see you put more story into your lyrics, make them have one topic you're talking about. That's when you'll become a great rapper.

Will be looking out for more of your stuff. Props.

Francis-Po responds:

Yes I can agree with you, I do pride myself in writing a full story.. Im a philosophical artist I sometimes talk in tongue, Hence the lyrics in this song, "Its like the Morris code everytime I explode".. Everything I say does have meaning tho. Some are easy to see what im saying and some are incredible hard. The lyrics that is.. But thanks a bunch man, i appreciate it, I couldnt do it without my producer tho, Me and Him together are a good team. Anything in the future I will send you a pm... Love the constructive criticism tho, I only want to get better

A kid with insomnia, just trying to make it.

Jesse Chisholm @InvasiveInsomniac

Age 31, Male

Pro Beatboxer

Australia

Joined on 8/14/10

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