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InvasiveInsomniac

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This song annoyed me

I don't know what it was about it, but it just annoyed me. Certain sounds were too loud, others were not mixed well. Not a very attractive style of music.

Rekuiem responds:

I'm sorry you feel that way, It IS a draft though, it hasn't really been mastered yet.

Wasn't my cup of tea

However it wasn't bad at all. What would make this track infinitely better would be placing some variations on your hi-hat's. Seeing you have FL Studio, check out Pilchards song 'Tzachitx'. That will help you see what I am talking about.

Solid Track, but the hi-hat's put me off a bit. More bass would be nice too.

Daydream-Anatomy responds:

Well thanks for your honesty in that it doesn't suit your tastes :]
I'm still working on this so some variation wouldn't be to hard to add, but I'm focusing more on composing the rest of the song before I go back to fix/change things.

Thank you for the review:]

Reminds me of Oblivion

Made me feel like I was playing Oblivion again.. Very well done. If I could put some input into it, I would simply make the sounds a bit softer/quieter due to it being the background music to a games first level. Other than that, wonderful.

Kyrieru responds:

Ah, I see. I'll try it out and see what it sounds like, since the velocity is easy to change anyway.

Beat is dope

Definitely in love with this beat, and the voice you've used in this rap, it's slick.

Only quam I have about it is just the lyrics, there's so much you could do with a beat and topic like this, but you limited yourself.. but that's only my personal opinion. Great song, I loved the references to pokemon too haha.

Cheers

The-toad411 responds:

Thanks man, for the review. I seem to have a problem with lyrics. This is a known problem, I'm getting better, in my opinion.

Thanks for stopping by and checkin it out.

Peace,
~T.R.E~

PS - I just checked what you bring to the table, it seems you are getting better every time you record. That is good progression. I hope to collab witchu sometime.

Lyrics were a let down..

However, Mao's verse was in time, which kind of made up for it. My suggestion for the future is try not to put so many FX on your voices, otherwise it gets distracting. Beat was fairly good, it was catchy. I don't know what it is with KlazikNadi's verse but the rhymes seem so forced?

"Im deranged change needed to defame
These wanna be wanna fuckas at their own game
/Ya wanna what? ya wanna what a nothing
Ya wanna shot at me? shit man ya rushing"

for example.. I dunno. anyhoo, props boys.

MaoDaMighty responds:

Thanks for the constructive criticism InvasiveInsomniac. Stay tuned.

How the fuck did this make the best of the week?

The timing is pathetic, your voices are forced, the beat is week, the lyrics are stupid and barely rhyme.. I'll never understand how this made best of the week. I think the timing is the worst I've EVER heard in a Hip-Hop song on Newgrounds.. You guys really bring down the name of Hip-Hop. Please Don't make anymore songs, you're embarrassing yourselves.

JayWeed responds:

hahaha yeah im not sure how this made best of the week either
appreciate the zero bomb
I'll make sure and message you next time a put a song out

Impressive

I'm all over this like a fat chick on a cupcake... didn't actually think it was gonna be this good... surprised me :)

Genjo responds:

thanks man, i appreciate alot :D

A kid with insomnia, just trying to make it.

Jesse Chisholm @InvasiveInsomniac

Age 30, Male

Pro Beatboxer

Australia

Joined on 8/14/10

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