InvasiveInsomniac's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[She Got Ahold of Me]

Dayum! This track's funky! Love the multi-tracking you've used, absolutely perfect for the song. The chorus was awesome, just, all round good listening.

This one is actually going in my favourites, you did so well Francis.

Might look at a collab in the future ay?

Francis-Po responds:

Thanks Alot, Glad I can go into your favorites! Means alot to me.. Been working hard and getting super creative.. After all, Its art. And a Collab in the future is def possible.. Hit me up with more details and what not!..

[Lets Ride]

You did well on this song Francis. You've got a damn good quality mic. Great job mixing, and your flow was fair dope.

My only problem I have with this song is that there was no real focal point in the lyrics. What is the meaning behind your lyrics, what are you trying to say in this song? It seems to me that it was a bit all over the place. You had a little bit of this and a little bit of that.

Lyrics will always be the strong point in any song. You're a good rapper Francis, so I want to see you put more story into your lyrics, make them have one topic you're talking about. That's when you'll become a great rapper.

Will be looking out for more of your stuff. Props.

Francis-Po responds:

Yes I can agree with you, I do pride myself in writing a full story.. Im a philosophical artist I sometimes talk in tongue, Hence the lyrics in this song, "Its like the Morris code everytime I explode".. Everything I say does have meaning tho. Some are easy to see what im saying and some are incredible hard. The lyrics that is.. But thanks a bunch man, i appreciate it, I couldnt do it without my producer tho, Me and Him together are a good team. Anything in the future I will send you a pm... Love the constructive criticism tho, I only want to get better

[Cave Covenant (instrumental)]

Audible Despair

Take the struggles of a man, lost with no hope, and make it into music; this is what it would sound like. Love that violin.

Just, chill. Love it Rama.

Crueltool responds:

Thanks man! Use it anyone)))

[Keeper Of Salvation (instr.)]

Brass is hella tricky to get right.

and you've almost got it. Look up 'Bliss n Eso - Anthem' on youtube. Check out the brass patterns on there. That should help you out a bit.

Crueltool responds:

ok dude. thanks